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Re: Puppet Show
Very interesting and good poem, I'm still trying to figure out the message of the poem but it seems like a very interesting one. The form is very good too, ...
Jan 4, 2021 -
Re: Scene 1: Infinite Wholeness
This was quite an interesting script, it has quite an interesting concept it's building off of and doing so quite well. This is the first script I've read on this ...
Jan 3, 2021 -
Re: Science is Quite Poetic
This was a pretty good poem/story, I like the repetition of the form with the top middle starting the next section, before some simply imagery is explained, and then explained ...
Jan 3, 2021 -
Re: Stop Glorifying Depression
Good use of repetition in every other line, the repetition is also added upon by the way you change the meaning of the same sentence in each repeated line. The ...
Jan 3, 2021 -
Re: things
Good message about appreciating things that seem insignificant to us, yet serve purposes we use every day. There is also good use of repetition in the poem that causes most ...
Jan 3, 2021 -
Re: Beauty of the Night
This is a pretty good poem that, the style reminds me a lot of nocturnes and aubades, mostly aubades. The rhyme scheme is good and constant across the six stanzas ...
Jan 3, 2021 -
Re: The Star of My Life
There is a good rhyme scheme to this and also good uses of repetition. There is also good use of form as well with with each stanza having a consistent ...
Jan 3, 2021 -
Re: A Soldier's Lullaby [Short story]
This is a very good story that has some great vivid imagery in it. I also like how there's something that feels almost dream-like from the mysterious elements. There is ...
Jan 2, 2021
